You have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: •what your suggestion is • why you think this suggestion will improve the park • when you would like to see this suggestion in action

Dear Sir, The purpose of writing

this

letter is to give a suggestion for a

park

located in my society., As

this

is the only

park

in the area, most members visit there for a walk or other activities.

Although

it may have all the amenities that a regular

park

requires, there is no game-related equipment where children can play

such

as; swings and sea saws. I suggest you

to

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install these plays in the

park

so parents can spend quality time with their children. The suggestion I give,

as a result

, will attract more people to the

park

and gain popularity in other societies. Apart from that, as good citizens, people would

also

help the city to keep the location neat and tidy so they can visit there and continue their activities throughout

this

summer. I want you to work on

this

idea at your early convenience so everyone can enjoy

this

season with their loved ones at the

park

and children can get out of their homes to do physical activities rather than just sitting on electronic devices. I would appreciate;

if

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you could install the machines before

this

summer. Yours Faithfully, Ishan