You have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: •what your suggestion is • why you think this suggestion will improve the park • when you would like to see this suggestion in action

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Dear Sir, The purpose of writing
this
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letter is to give a suggestion for a
park
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located in my society., As
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is the only
park
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in the area, most members visit there for a walk or other activities.
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it may have all the amenities that a regular
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requires, there is no game-related equipment where children can play
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as; swings and sea saws. I suggest you
to
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install these plays in the
park
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so parents can spend quality time with their children. The suggestion I give,
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, will attract more people to the
park
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and gain popularity in other societies. Apart from that, as good citizens, people would
also
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help the city to keep the location neat and tidy so they can visit there and continue their activities throughout
this
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summer. I want you to work on
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idea at your early convenience so everyone can enjoy
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season with their loved ones at the
park
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and children can get out of their homes to do physical activities rather than just sitting on electronic devices. I would appreciate;
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you could install the machines before
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summer. Yours Faithfully, Ishan
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