Write about the following topic: A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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People
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nowadays tend to be easily tempted by material possessions and social
status
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in a modern lifestyle with various options. Other conventional values, like honesty, nobility, kindness, and trust, do not seem to matter. Personally, I think
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holds true, and there are several reasons behind
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trend, which could bring both benefits and setbacks to
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at large. Never before has
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experienced
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material redundancy and technological advancement, which allow us to spend excessively on diverse kinds of products and to view them as materials reflecting our wealth and social
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. More specifically,
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tend to associate luxury brand products
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as Gucci or Nike with high-quality and up-to-date designs.
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way of purchasing products is called consumerism, which helps stimulate production and economic growth and
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enhances one's appearance. If the person possesses more materials with famous brand names, he is considered a high-class individual.
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is a way of showing off to other
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of the same social
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, and
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it helps establish a network with high-quality
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. Taking celebrities as an example, they are considered wealthy and successful
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their position in the social hierarchy.
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, other conventional criteria are undervalued
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rising trend. Dignity,
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honour
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, kindness, and trust, once setting a basic standard for human
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and actions, are now neglected in modern
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.
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would compete with each other for the sake of their own material satisfaction or public image. In
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case, murders happen because someone forgets to repay their loans, or war could take place if one's public image is ruined. Reports and news show that these scenarios happen every day without notice.
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, a woman in Bien Hoa District possessing assets worth over 10 million dollars was killed out of jealousy.
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rings an alarm that, unless there is anything done to prevent
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, damage could occur. In conclusion, I believe there is truth behind the fact that
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and material possessions influence the way
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operates nowadays and measure a person's worth.
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, other traditional values should be taken into consideration to maintain the order of
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, or else there will be inevitable consequences.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • material possessions
  • social status
  • old-fashioned values
  • honour
  • kindness
  • trust
  • societal norms
  • social media platforms
  • value system
  • material wealth
  • personal relationships
  • societal well-being
  • timeless moral values
  • value-driven society
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