With the advent of globalisation, more and more
people
are using modern technology as a part of their daily
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, which
as a result
is uplifting the economy throughout the globe. But the negative side of
this
ought
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be overseen. I completely agree with the
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notion. Endangering the personal lives of
people
,
as well as
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of numerous fraudulent agencies will prove
this
.
To begin
with, modern up-to-date technology has made the lives of
people
easier and has enabled them to connect to the whole world by
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means of social media platforms. Populace
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events happening in their day-to-day life on various platforms like
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and
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.
This
empowers
people
like stalkers to gain an inside edge into somebody's life they have
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in.
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,
according to
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survey, most crimes like
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or rape are on
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rise, as criminals can easily know where and what their victim is doing through the help of social media applications.
To continue with, as
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economy is achieving great heights, a major chunk of
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is still under the working class who are trying to make ends meet. Attractive investment schemes run by fraudulent agencies are striving on these
people
, using them as a commodity to earn money.
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advanced technology and advertising through various platforms
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helped these fraudsters to have a strong grip on the struggling populace.
For example
, as per record
last
year the
people
of India lost around twenty million dollars on various fraudulent schemes operating nationwide.
To sum up
, the advent of globalisation works like a
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sword. On
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people
are achieving wonders in every sector but
on the other
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in notorious activity. Individuals should not let their
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when it comes to
their privacy and wealth. It's solely the
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responsibiltyCorrect your spelling
responsibility
responsible
to
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for themselves.