The Chart Below Shows The Percentage Of Female Members Of Parliament In 5 European Countries From 2000 To 2012

The Chart Below Shows The Percentage Of Female Members Of Parliament In 5 European Countries From 2000 To 2012
The given graph presents the proportion of
women
working as parliamentary members in five European countries between 2000 and 2012.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the percentage of female
parliamentarian
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parliamentarians
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in all nations examined, with
UK
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witnessing the most dramatic rise.
However
, the UK
cosistently
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consistently
had the lowest share of
women
in parliament when compared with that of other countries. In 2000, approximately 5 per
cent
participants
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of parliament in the UK were
women
, after which it saw a sharp growth to 20 per
cent
in 2008, before ending the period at roughly 25 per
cent
.
Similarly
, the figure for
female
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females
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elected to be a part of parliament in France and Germany continuously climbed
during
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12 years, from 25 per
cent
to above 33 per
cent
and from 34 per
cent
to 38
percent
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respectively. The percentage of Italian parliamentary representatives who were
women
started at 26 per
cent
,
then
gradually advanced and surpassed Germany to be the nation
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had
highest
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number with nearly 40
percent
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per cent
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in 2012. Opposite changes can be seen in the figure for Belgium, which slightly increased from 16 per
cent
to 24 per
cent
in
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4-year
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4 years
and
followed
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by a minor decline.
Nonetheless
, touching
at
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24 per
cent
of the final year, its rate was still higher than
the
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beginning of the period.
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