Some people say that adveritising is extreely successful at persuading us to buy things . Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Few individuals say that
advertisisng
is significantly great at persuading humans to buy things. Other Correct your spelling
advertising
populace
think that advertising is so general that we no longer pay attention to it. Correct your spelling
people
This
essay speaks about both the views on the ground that it varies according to
the citizens.
Firstly
, human beings of
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apply
few
can believe advertising can be beneficial to Correct quantifier usage
apply
buy
things. Advertisements Wrong verb form
buying
display
in our Wrong verb form
are displayed
day to day
Add a hyphen
day-to-day
life
whenever we watch Fix the agreement mistake
lives
out
mobile Correct your spelling
our
phone
, television ads so on. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
Moreover
, it helps to connect with an individuals
. Correct the article-noun agreement
individuals
an individual
In addition
, populase
get satisfied Replace the word
the population
on
purchasing Change preposition
with
thinks
by watching some new ads popping Correct your spelling
things
in
their screen. Change preposition
up on
For
example
a person is thinking Add a comma
example,
to buy
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of buying
mobile
Add an article
a mobile
phone
within this
year. Suddenly, an advertisement of
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for
mobile
Correct article usage
a mobile
phone
gets
displayed Verb problem
is
in
his television with its complete specifications and special offer. So, now he buys the Change preposition
on
phone
and get
benefited by saving a bit amount.
Change the verb form
gets
Secondly
, few people think that advertising is so common because they understand advertising is a strategy to sell the
products. Correct article usage
apply
Besides
, it completely
used for company benefit. Add a missing verb
is completely
Furthermore
, little population find advertisement is
boring and Unnecessary verb
apply
repetative
stuff. Correct your spelling
repetitive
For example
, a person is watching sports
channel. In between Correct article usage
a sports
of
that play there may be some advertisements Change preposition
apply
displaying
Wrong verb form
displayed
in
the television. But an individual ignores the part as the main intention is to watch sports.
In Change preposition
on
my
conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
the Correct word choice
apply
benfits
of Correct your spelling
benefits
adverstising
particularly Correct your spelling
advertising
to buy
things for Change preposition
for buying
people
sarisfaction and needs have improved their Change noun form
people's
life
by saving quite a bit of money and Fix the agreement mistake
lives
to provide
mutual benefits. Change the verb form
providing
However
, as long as we carefully consider the importance of advertisements, the
usefulness Change the word
their
are
clearly positive.Change the verb form
is
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