Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
think that it is better if
people
deliver vegan
food
to different miserable
country
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countries
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where hard to
plants
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plant
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.
While
others disagree and think
that is
a bad idea.
This
essay agrees that it is more
benefical
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beneficial
for anyone to deliver
fruits
and
vegetables
due to
healthy
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a healthy
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lifestyle. It must be recognized that trading
food
can give multiple benefits to our countries.
Firstly
, exporting
of
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apply
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fruit
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fruits
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and
vegetable
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vegetables
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can increase income and improve the relationship
of
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between
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countries.
For instance
, China is
the
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an
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example of
exporter
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an exporter
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of
fruits
and
vegetables
,
foods
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Food
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relations and
bond
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bonds
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are
concreated
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concerned
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with trading
polisier
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policies
policier
which bring peace among nations.
Secondly
it
braunding
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breaks
horizons
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the horizons
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of exporting and improving
fruits
and
vegetables
to places where
such
are not available in order to enjoy
variety
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a variety
the variety
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of them in our city.
Therefore
,
this
in
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apply
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future helps countries
as well as
common
people
.
On the other hand
,
people
believe that trading
of
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apply
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food
items is not
benefical
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beneficial
because
,
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apply
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they
thinks
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think
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best of the
quality
of
vegetables
and
fruits
are
send
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sent
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to
others
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other
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nations
while
citizen
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a citizen
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of that country
get
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the
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apply
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poor
quality
food
and products which is the main reason.
Also
, first preference is given to exporting
quality
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the quality
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of
fruits
.
For example
,
USA
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the USA
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is
the
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a
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country
that
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where
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the
food
,
partically
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particularly
fruits
and veggies will be well-preserved
,
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apply
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so that the
quality
will remain high and usable. In conclusion,
people
think that importing organic foods
are
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is
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not
effective
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an effective
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stragery
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strategy
,
while
me and other individuals agree that
this
method is very efficient.
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