Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
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think that it is better if
people
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deliver vegan
food
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to different miserable
country
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countries
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where hard to
plants
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.
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others disagree and think
that is
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a bad idea.
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essay agrees that it is more
benefical
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beneficial
for anyone to deliver
fruits
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and
vegetables
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due to
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healthy
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a healthy
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lifestyle. It must be recognized that trading
food
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can give multiple benefits to our countries.
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, exporting
of
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apply
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fruit
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fruits
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and
vegetable
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vegetables
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can increase income and improve the relationship
of
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between
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countries.
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, China is
the
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an
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example of
exporter
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an exporter
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of
fruits
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and
vegetables
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,
foods
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Food
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relations and
bond
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bonds
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are
concreated
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concerned
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with trading
polisier
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policies
policier
which bring peace among nations.
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it
braunding
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breaks
horizons
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the horizons
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of exporting and improving
fruits
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and
vegetables
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to places where
such
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are not available in order to enjoy
variety
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a variety
the variety
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of them in our city.
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,
this
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in
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apply
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future helps countries
as well as
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common
people
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.
On the other hand
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,
people
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believe that trading
of
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apply
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food
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items is not
benefical
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beneficial
because
,
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apply
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they
thinks
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think
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best of the
quality
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of
vegetables
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and
fruits
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are
send
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sent
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to
others
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other
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nations
while
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citizen
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a citizen
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of that country
get
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gets
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the
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apply
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poor
quality
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food
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and products which is the main reason.
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, first preference is given to exporting
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quality
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the quality
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of
fruits
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.
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,
USA
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the USA
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is
the
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a
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country
that
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where
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the
food
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,
partically
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particularly
fruits
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and veggies will be well-preserved
,
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apply
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so that the
quality
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will remain high and usable. In conclusion,
people
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think that importing organic foods
are
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is
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not
effective
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an effective
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stragery
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strategy
,
while
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me and other individuals agree that
this
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method is very efficient.
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