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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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some
people
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 think that it is better if
people
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 deliver vegan
food
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 to different miserable countries where hard to plant.
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 others disagree and think
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 a bad idea.
This
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 essay agrees that it is more beneficial for anyone to deliver
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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due to
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 a healthy lifestyle. It must be recognized that trading
food
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 can give multiple benefits to our countries.
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, exporting
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 can increase income and improve the relationship between countries.
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, China is an example of an exporter of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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,
Food
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 relations and bonds are concerned with trading policies which bring peace among nations.
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, it branding the horizons of exporting and improving
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 to places where
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 are not available in order to enjoy variety.
on the other hand
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,
people
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 believe that trading
food
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 items is not beneficial because they think best of the
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quality
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best quality
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 of
vegetables
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 and
fruits
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are
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is
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 sent to other nations
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 a citizen of that country gets poor
quality
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food
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 and products which is the main reason.
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, first preference is given to exporting the
quality
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 of
fruits
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.
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, the USA is a country where the
food
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, particularly
fruits
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 and veggies will be well-preserved so that the
quality
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 will remain high and usable. in conclusion,
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people
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some people
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 think that importing organic foods is not an effective strategy,
while
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 me and other individuals agree that
this
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 method is very efficient.
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