Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
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the airplane
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airplane
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is
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common
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used to deliver fruits and vegetables
for
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many
countries
where
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plants are hard to grow
up
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or end of the season. Many think it is a good idea, but some don’t. In my opinion,
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two sides of the main idea and the authorities will discuss the reason
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this
opinion. On the one hand,
aircrafts
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are the most convenient way to support some
country
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countries
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about
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get out of poverty and some kind of famine. Generally, in a few
countries
,
air
transportation is very expensive. For long distances,
many
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moneys
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money
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have
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to
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, just
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fuel and fee services. The fact said that
,
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air
pollution increases every year because
this
problem causes a part. And generally, it can’t save
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fuel than the others
such
as train or car.
On the other hand
,
air
transportation is an excellent way to exploit
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employers and
times
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. It can help
human
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humans
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about
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get more
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to prepare new ones or do something else. In some first world
countries
, they will deliver their foods and supplements
for
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some
countries
that
having
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poor quality
life
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of life
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and always have famine
that
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can
effect
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affect
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on
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the economics of that country or
being
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a social problem
such
as poverty. Taking everything into account, using
air
transportation can be more convenient in some circumstances, but we need to reduce the percentage of aircraft to protect the environment because it is the main reason
of
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air
pollution.
Besides
that, concentrate on de
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