Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others think that people can not be expected to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether to choose a satisfying
job
or a satisfying paycheck is a great dilemma for young
generation. Some Correct article usage
the young
of
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apply
the
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apply
individual
says that a Change to a plural noun
individuals
secure
job
is more crucial than a satisfying job
while
other think that satisfaction
is
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in
job
is more significant Correct article usage
a job
that
a Correct word choice
than
secure
job
. This
essay intends to interprete
both viewpoints. I, personally with the former view.
There are Correct your spelling
interpret
verious
causes to select a Correct your spelling
various
secure
job
. First of all, a secure
job
ensure
regular income which is very significant to Change the verb form
ensures
earn
one's living like daily expenses, Wrong verb form
earning
houses
rent, debts and some savings for retirement. Fix the agreement mistake
house
Secondly
, people
who choose a secure
job
, they
feel less stress Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
being fired for their silly mistakes than the Change preposition
about
people
who choose satisfying
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a satisfying
the satisfying
job
. Farthermore
, a Correct your spelling
Furthermore
secure
job
ensure stability in the job
sector and it also
give
several opportunities to increase Change the verb form
gives
their
productivity and profitability.
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apply
On the other hand
, people
who right
behind the satisfying Add a missing verb
are right
job
argued
that a satisfying Wrong verb form
argue
job
is significant to create
a better Wrong verb form
creating
worklife
balance. Correct your spelling
work-life
work life
In addition
, a satisfying job
motivate
employees to become more Change the verb form
motivates
dedicative
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dedicated
for
the Change preposition
to
organsiation
which Correct your spelling
organisation
help
to increase the productivity of the Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
organsiation
. Correct your spelling
organisation
Job
satisfaction
reduce
work stress which is Change the verb form
reduces
also
important to lead a batter
life. To cite an example, a Correct your spelling
better
freelencer
can work Correct your spelling
freelancer
according to
their willingness which help
them to create a good Change the verb form
helps
worklife
balance and to lead to Correct your spelling
work-life
work life
better
life.
I believe that, though Add an article
a better
job
satisfaction
have
enormous benefits Change the verb form
has
but
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apply
job
security is more important than job
satisfaction
. Because,
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apply
people
's mind
are so dynamic their Fix the agreement mistake
minds
mind
and demand change with time when they achieve Fix the agreement mistake
minds
job
satisfaction
they expect more so, i
think Change the capitalization
I
this
job
satisfaction
is not constant. As well as
, Rephrase
Also
job
satisfaction
reduce
their productivity which is detrimental Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
for
their creative thinking. After fulfilling Change preposition
to
job
satisfaction
they become less ambitious and
which Correct word choice
apply
make
them dull. Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
Conversily
, a Correct your spelling
Conversely
secure
job
motivate employees to give their best afford
with little worries about being fired.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
effort
i
would like to reiterate my opinion that, though Change the capitalization
I
job
satisfaction
is important in workplace
, Add an article
the workplace
but
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apply
job
security is more significant than it because job
security ensure
regular income and keep individuals Change the verb form
ensures
stress free
Add a hyphen
stress-free
fron
being fired.Correct your spelling
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