The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates three types of offences (burglary, car theft, and robbery) in Machester city centre over 9 years from 2003-2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the number of burglaries dropped dramatically over the given period,
while
the
rate
of car thefts increased.
Nevertheless
, the number of robberies did not change a lot. With regards to burglary, it went up slightly from 3400
cases
in the first year to 3600 in 2004.
However
, the
rate
of
this
crime went down, reaching more than 1000
cases
in 2008.
Following
this
, the figure rose to around 1300
cases
at the end
of the period. When it comes to robbery, it started at more than 500
cases
in 2003. After that, its
rate
fluctuated and stood at the same point in 2012. Regarding car theft, it started with 2300
cases
in 2003. The figure
then
fell to 2000
cases
in 2006. In the next six years, the
rate
climbed gradually, reaching the highest point of 2800
cases
in the end.
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