The diagram illustrates the percentage of how much money
did
the residents of the United States of America spent on various things in 1966.
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overall
perspective, it can be seen that most people Linking Words
spent
money on food. Wrong verb form
spend
However
, computers were the most unpopular Linking Words
between
the habitats.
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among
According to
the data, it can be seen that the majority of residents, 44 per cent , paid for food in 1966. A Linking Words
further
23% were for cars. It is Linking Words
also
worth mentioning that furniture and Linking Words
and
petrol were not very purchased, reaching only 10% and 9%, respectively.
As can be seen from the pie chart, only 7 per cent of Americans spent money on restaurants. What is more, paperback editions did not play a significant role for people, reaching 6 per cent. The minority of the residents of the United States of America, a mere 1%, bought electronic devices, to be more precise, computers.Remove the redundancy
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