The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
The diagram illustrates the percentage of how much money
did
the residents of the United States of America spent on various things in 1966.
Looking from the Unnecessary verb
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overall
perspective, it can be seen that most people spent
money on food. Wrong verb form
spend
However
, computers were the most unpopular between
the habitats.
Change preposition
among
According to
the data, it can be seen that the majority of residents, 44 per cent , paid for food in 1966. A further
23% were for cars. It is also
worth mentioning that furniture and and
petrol were not very purchased, reaching only 10% and 9%, respectively.
As can be seen from the pie chart, only 7 per cent of Americans spent money on restaurants. What is more, paperback editions did not play a significant role for people, reaching 6 per cent. The minority of the residents of the United States of America, a mere 1%, bought electronic devices, to be more precise, computers.Remove the redundancy
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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