Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that people who use a foreign
language
in everyday life can create social and practical issues.
However
, I disagree with the statement above since
language
brings benefits in today’s world.
Therefore
, I will explain the reasons in the paragraph below.
To begin
, the number of international companies in Indonesia is increasing every year. Many youth these days prefer to work in foreign organizations because they can give high salaries,
comfortable
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workplace, and a place to learn.
For instance
, international companies become a place for
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youngsters to practice their foreign
language
skills since the management and colleagues are foreigners.
Hence
, it is very important to excel in foreign languages in order to bridge the
language
barrier
such
as English.
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a positive impact in today’s world because it can be a weapon for wider connections especially in business.
On the other hand
, multilingualism become more important. It can
be opening
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up employment opportunities because by being able to speak a foreign
language
, societies could make a real connection with people and know more about diverse cultures, places, and so on.
For example
, the number of
foreigner
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who
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in developing business in Indonesia remain increasing. It is because of the beautiful landscape and higher probability of getting many profit.
Therefore
, it is essential for job seekers to good and understand foreign languages. In conclusion, it is not true that foreign
language
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can bring social and practical issues. The fast-paced business today requires human civilization to master more than one
language
. Societies are
also
able to get benefits
such
as opening up many opportunities to find a job and eliminating gap barriers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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