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With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often thought that the
Internet
 will replace the newspapers. In my opinion, I agree with
this
 view because it is convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly.
Firstly
, getting the
news
 by using mobile phones is much easier compared to reading the newspaper.
In other words
,
people
 who have access to the
Internet
 can get the information that they want anytime and anywhere.
Nevertheless
, if
people
 want to read the newspaper, they often go to the nearest shop, which can be troublesome.
For example
, on a rainy day, it would be much easier for
people
 to get to know the
news
 around the world through social media rather than having a hard copy of the newspaper.
Secondly
,
companies
 will save a large amount of money.
That is
 to say, by using the online platform, they will not spend a lot of money to print newspapers and deliver them to their destination.
As a result
, several
companies
 have started to reduce the number of
news
 publications and focus on online
news
,
such
 as BBC, Daily
News
 and The Sun.
Finally
, the
Internet
 has helped the environment to be preserved because it avoids environmental problems,
such
 as deforestation. In the past, when the
Internet
 was not well developed, most publication
companies
 relied heavily on paper to share the
news
 with the public, and
this
 was one of the reasons why many trees were cut. To illustrate, in Saudi Arabia, many
companies
 have switched to online
news
 with the aim of protecting the environment.
To sum up
,
while
people
 may vary in their opinion, I believe that by using the
Internet
, both
companies
 and individuals will stop spending unnecessary money and save the environment. If all countries band using newspapers, the nature would improve.
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