Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
Governments are becoming aware of the environmental problems caused by
transport
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pollution
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Therefore
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transport
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as well as
reduce the ticket price to greatly decrease the Linking Words
pollution
. In my opinion, those methods are beneficial, Use synonyms
however
, they will not solve the core of the problem.
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such
investments will enable us to lower the prices, which, Linking Words
as a consequence
, will attract more citizens to choose buses or other means of transportation over their private cars, which are one of the biggest causes of Linking Words
pollution
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Moreover
, investments can be made to develop new ecological transportation vehicles Linking Words
such
as electric buses and trams, which are more environmentally friendly.
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Nevertheless
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such
changes are not enough to solve or greatly affect the amount of Linking Words
pollution
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transport
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Although
the prices may be attractive, most people will still stick to their routine of driving on a daily basis. I assume, that investing not only in the systems but Linking Words
also
in the infrastructure in the cities, Linking Words
for instance
, creating roads for bicycles, will get people to choose more ecological options, Linking Words
thus
reducing the amount of unnecessary driving. Another idea is to raise awareness about the environmental effects of driving and promote actively the alternative version to diesel cars, the electric ones.
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To conclude
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as well as
reducing the prices is not enough to solve the problem of Linking Words
pollution
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as developing the infrastructure and promoting electric cars.Linking Words
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Expand on the idea of investing in infrastructure and promoting electric cars in the conclusion.