Some people think that the popularity of the cinemas around the world has declined. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era,
people
prefer to watch movies
on phones or on TV than go to the cinemas to watch but demand for cinemas is stable.I partially agree with the viewpoints
that the popularity of cinemas has declined.
On the one hand, Everyone in the world is busy becoming successful as they are working hard in study or at work and they do not have too much time to go to the cinema to watch Fix the agreement mistake
viewpoint
movies
. However
, community
do not prefer to watch Correct article usage
the community
movies
in cunema
as they have small Change the capitalization
Cunema
threatre
rooms in their homes as well and the flick which Correct your spelling
theatre
are
released in the Change the verb form
is
cinplex
are already available on apps like Correct your spelling
complex
cineplex
netfilx
and adults prefer to watch alone so they see them online.Correct your spelling
Netflix
NetFlix
Instead
of this
the cost of the flip ticket is too much Add a comma
this,
expnsive
and fewer and fewer Correct your spelling
expensive
people
afford the cost of the ticket.
Whereas
, there are many people
who love to go in
Change preposition
to
picture
threat to watch the movie as they Capitalize word
Picture
excited
to see the films in Add a missing verb
are excited
the
public. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
to this
, Most of
Change preposition
apply
the
families prefer to see the theatre on weekends because of their busy routine and want to spend some time with their family Correct article usage
apply
as well as
there are some people
who want to see newly released movies
in the picture house rather than in another place. For example
, there is a study shows that all the threat in surrey
is overbooked on Capitalize word
Surrey
the
Saturday and Sunday Correct article usage
apply
then
the weekdays.
In conclusion, the demand for flick house
has not declined because Fix the agreement mistake
houses
people
prefer to watch the cinema but due to
their busy schedule and expensive entry ticket
they do not go oftenFix the agreement mistake
tickets
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