The line graph show the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of patients who visited the clinic of a hospital during a week for four different reasons between 2010 and 2016.Use synonyms
Overall
, it is important to note that there was an increase in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who came for Use synonyms
Eye
check-ups from 2010 to 2016 and the Diabetic Use synonyms
category
during the specific time.Use synonyms
Moreover
,Linking Words
Birth
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control
accounted for the most Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
in 2012 Use synonyms
while
the Dental Linking Words
category
stood at the lowest Use synonyms
number
at the same time.
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According to
the Linking Words
Eye
figure,roughly 120 people went to the clinic for Use synonyms
Eye
therapeutic interventions.Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
grew slightly and stood at approximately 150 in 2012.Use synonyms
similarly
,approximately 70 people went into the hospital for diabetes interventions,and it increased slightly to 90 in 2012. The Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
for Use synonyms
eye
problems climbed dramatically from 2012 onwards and peaked at 350 Use synonyms
while
the diabet figure levelled off from 2012 to 2014.Linking Words
However
, there was a steep increase from 2014 onwards.
In terms of Linking Words
birth
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control
,Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
category
accounted for around 240 at the beginning of the period and peaked at about 270 after two years.Use synonyms
On the other hand
,there was a considerable reduction in Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
for dental Use synonyms
category
from 100 to around 60.Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
birth
Use synonyms
control
Use synonyms
visitors
reduced sharply between 2012 and 2014,there was a significant growth in the Use synonyms
number
of dental Use synonyms
visitors
.Both Use synonyms
birth
Use synonyms
control
and dental Use synonyms
visitors
experienced a slight growth in 2016.Use synonyms
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