The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs display how much

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nutrients

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such

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as Carbohydrates,Protein,Saturated fat,Glucose and other

nutrients

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are contained in a medium baked

potato

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and a

macaroni

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.

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, it is evident from the diagram that both foods contain

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higher proportion of Carbohydrates.

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with,

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Carbohydrates

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the major nutrient in both dinners, as

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made up slightly more than a half and two fifth of the

macaroni

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and the

medium sized

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potato

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.

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, the least

nutrient

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in both meals were other

nutrients

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in the

macaroni

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and saturated fats in the

potato

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at 5% and 10% respectively hitting the bottom of the chart.

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,there was a similar amount of glucose and protein at 11% each, in

macaroni

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and a clash in the percentage of glucose and other

nutrients

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in the baked

potato

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, which

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contained

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higher

percent

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of protein of 25% compared to the other dinner which was at 11% making it a difference of 14%.