Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Todays
, with the numerous developments in transportation individuals can reach almost every kind of Fix the agreement mistake
Today
fruits
and Fix the agreement mistake
fruit
plants
regardless of which season they Fix the agreement mistake
plant
in
and Add a missing verb
are in
fertility
level of their land. Some people believe that Correct article usage
the fertility
this
is good, whereas
others argue that use
of Correct article usage
the use
airplane
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airplanes
for
this
reason is not fair. I, personally, believe in former
idea, and Add an article
the former
a former
this
essay will explain both sides and give examples why
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of why
this
is good.
The proponents of the idea that fruits and vegetables
transport via Change the noun form
vegetable
airplanes
is good for humanity Change the spelling
aeroplanes
argue
that since different parts of the world do not have the same features Add the particle
to argue
such
as rivers, fertile lands
or appropriate weather, it is essential to transport these nutritients
to them who live in poor conditions. Some areas like Correct your spelling
nutrients
the
South Africa suffer from water shortage so their agricultural activities can not produce enough Correct article usage
apply
crops
for their residents which leads to lack
of food and health issues in the long term. Correct article usage
a lack
However
, some parts of the earth are luckier since they have suitable weather, fertile lands
and agricultural machines which rise
their Correct your spelling
raise
crops
easily so they produce crops
more than their needs. Exporting these crops
make
a good income for the farmers and provides an opportunity to access Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
nutritient
diets for those who live in poor Correct your spelling
nutritious
nutrient
lands
.
The opponents that
belief argue that Change preposition
of that
while
transporting these products Correct word choice
apply
such
as wheat, avocado or banana via airplanes
may contribute Change the spelling
aeroplanes
in
global warming. Since Change preposition
to
airplanes
use petrol Change the spelling
aeroplanes
for
produce energy for flying, they emit huge amounts of Change preposition
to
carbondioxide
into the atmosphere. Correct your spelling
carbon dioxide
This
process may end up with the
climate change which is the most important pressing Correct article usage
apply
isssue
in our Correct your spelling
issue
worlds
.
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world
Finally
, as far as I am concerned, with the arrangement of flying schedule and implementing laws by governments which restricts the number of annual flight, transporting fundamental nutrients toward poor lands
is essential for those people who live in
there.
In Change preposition
apply
conclution
, Correct your spelling
conclusion
while
there are some drawbacs
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drawbacks
for plants
transport via airplane Change preposition
to plant
such
as contribution
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the contribution
in
global warming, the positive sides of these Change preposition
to
transports
seem more crucial for survival. It is important to decrease the negative consequences by implementing regulations and continue transporting fundamental Fix the agreement mistake
transport
nutritiens
.Correct your spelling
nutrients
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