Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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, with the numerous developments in transportation individuals can reach almost every kind of

fruits

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and

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regardless of which season they

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level of their land. Some people believe that

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is good. The proponents of the idea that fruits and

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transport via

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is good for humanity

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that since different parts of the world do not have the same features

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or appropriate weather, it is essential to transport these

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nutrients

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South Africa suffer from water shortage so their agricultural activities can not produce enough

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for their residents which leads to

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of food and health issues in the long term.

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, some parts of the earth are luckier since they have suitable weather, fertile

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and agricultural machines which

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easily so they produce

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more than their needs. Exporting these

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a good income for the farmers and provides an opportunity to access

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nutritious

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diets for those who live in poor

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transporting these products

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may contribute

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global warming. Since

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use petrol

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produce energy for flying, they emit huge amounts of

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carbon dioxide

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climate change which is the most important pressing

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, as far as I am concerned, with the arrangement of flying schedule and implementing laws by governments which restricts the number of annual flight, transporting fundamental nutrients toward poor

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there are some

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drawbacks

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transport via airplane

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global warming, the positive sides of these

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seem more crucial for survival. It is important to decrease the negative consequences by implementing regulations and continue transporting fundamental

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nutrients

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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You are invited to a party, however, because of some reasons you didn’t attend. Write a letter to the friend who invites you: (1) explain the reason why you didn’t go; (2) express your apology; (3) ask about some details in the party.

Most of our information comes from the internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree?

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Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most school still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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