Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good but other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Todays
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, with the numerous developments in transportation individuals can reach almost every kind of
fruits
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fruit
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and
plants
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plant
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regardless of which season they
in
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and
fertility
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level of their land. Some people believe that
this
is good,
whereas
others argue that
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the use
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of
airplane
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airplanes
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for
this
reason is not fair. I, personally, believe in
former
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idea, and
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why
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this
is good. The proponents of the idea that fruits and
vegetables
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transport via
airplanes
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is good for humanity
argue
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that since different parts of the world do not have the same features
such
as rivers, fertile
lands
or appropriate weather, it is essential to transport these
nutritients
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nutrients
to them who live in poor conditions. Some areas like
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South Africa suffer from water shortage so their agricultural activities can not produce enough
crops
for their residents which leads to
lack
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of food and health issues in the long term.
However
, some parts of the earth are luckier since they have suitable weather, fertile
lands
and agricultural machines which
rise
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raise
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their
crops
easily so they produce
crops
more than their needs. Exporting these
crops
make
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a good income for the farmers and provides an opportunity to access
nutritient
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nutritious
nutrient
diets for those who live in poor
lands
. The opponents
that
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belief argue that
while
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transporting these products
such
as wheat, avocado or banana via
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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may contribute
in
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global warming. Since
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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use petrol
for
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to
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produce energy for flying, they emit huge amounts of
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
into the atmosphere.
This
process may end up with
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climate change which is the most important pressing
isssue
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issue
in our
worlds
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.
Finally
, as far as I am concerned, with the arrangement of flying schedule and implementing laws by governments which restricts the number of annual flight, transporting fundamental nutrients toward poor
lands
is essential for those people who live
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there. In
conclution
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conclusion
,
while
there are some
drawbacs
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drawbacks
for plants
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to plant
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transport via airplane
such
as
contribution
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in
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global warming, the positive sides of these
transports
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seem more crucial for survival. It is important to decrease the negative consequences by implementing regulations and continue transporting fundamental
nutritiens
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nutrients
.
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