35.The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays how
do
the families in a specific country spent their weekly earnings in the years 1968 and 2018.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, the expenditure in
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on
food
was a lot more
higher than Change the word
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in
the other products in 1968. The other Change preposition
on
significan
feature of Correct your spelling
significant
this
graph is that in 2018, the highest waste was leisure, while
fuel and power had the least spending.
Food
had a use of 35% of the income in 1968 triple that of housing tied in second place with clothing and footware
, which only had a percentage of 10%, Correct your spelling
footwear
while
leisure only occupied 9% of their weekly remuneration. Household and personal goods along with
transport had a proportion of approximately 7.5% each. Furthermore
, fuel and power had the least payout with only 6%.
Food
and
clothing and Correct word choice
apply
footware
, Correct your spelling
footwear
their
value was reduced by half, to around 17% and 5% respectively, Correct pronoun usage
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while
leisure made significant gains by increasing their value by nearly 13% to approximately 22%, overtaking food
as the first ranked expenditure. At the same time, housing and transport’s
waste rose to 19% and 14% respectively, Change noun form
transport
while
household goods remained stable and personal goods, fuel and power dropped to only 4%.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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