The pie charts illustrate how many female and male were employed by manual occupation compared to non-manual profession in Great Britain in 1992.
The pie charts display the proportion of both genders that were recruited by a manual job in comparison to a non-manual profession in 1992 among the British.
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,it is evident from the diagram that there was a small number of people that were employed as general labourers.
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with, A huge difference of 21% was observed among males and females working on crafts, with the males having the highest number of the year at 31%.Linking Words
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clerical or related Jobs were more than the men.
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,the percentage of boys and girls accepted to work as Linking Words
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Finally
, Very few of both genders worked as general labourers hitting the through of the chart at 1% in females and 2% in males in Great Britain.Linking Words
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