The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods.

The bar graph illustrates the amount of expenses on five different consumer items

by

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in

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UK

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the UK

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and

France

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in 2010.

Overall

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, both countries spent most on cars, computers and books,

on the other hand

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, paid less on perfume and cameras. The difference between the two groups

were

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almost double.

First,

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both countries purchased mostly

on

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cars, computers and books.

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, cars had the highest sales in

France

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and the

UK

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with 400,000 and 450,000 respectively.

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, the second

most

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highest expense

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computers for

France

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which was 40,000 higher than

UK

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,

as well as

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, books for

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UK

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the UK

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which was 100,000 more than

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France

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in France

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.

However

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, perfume and cameras had the smallest amount of paid expenses. For the

UK

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, cameras had

the

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apply

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higher sales which was significant since it was triple

of

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apply

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the amount paid by

France

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consumers.

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for perfume expenditures,

France

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was at 200,000

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and was 51,000 higher than the

UK

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sales.