In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In today's world, business often
highlight
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their items are unique in some
way
because
this
approach
give
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them a leg to get widely known to their customers. It should
be consider
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as a
postive
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positive
development since
customer
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customers
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will have more choices in one type of
products
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product
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. More and more
companies
nowdays
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are try
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are tried
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to make their
products
are
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novel in some
way
, and
this
way
will give them a chance to win influence and interact
for
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their business. As a feature is launched, there are always a
lot
of consumers out there curious
about
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.
As a result
, a range of reviewers is talking about and making the
products
again and again appear
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the internet, and strike the
attetion
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attention
of
to
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the users.
For example
, in Viet Nam,
although
there are a
lot
of chicken fried
companies
on the market, KFC always stand out in
this
area because they constantly
came
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up with new
sauce
recipe for their dishes. Sometimes, these
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inspiration
is
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from
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the
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seasonal food
source
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or
followed
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follow
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current
Vietnamese's
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trend
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trends
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. The
branchies
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branches
have cream, spicy, traditional, fish
sauce
flavor
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and more, And their fish
sauce
is the newest and there
is
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not
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no
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other brands
have
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it, which
capture
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captures
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a
lot
of
concern
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concerned
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of
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apply
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people. Customers are in line and line, waiting to try out
this
unusual combination. Making up some new things in
business's
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a business's
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advertise
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should be seen as a positive trend because
this
motivate
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these other
companies
,
brands
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and brands
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come
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to come
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up with the same, or not better, creative
way
to win the spotlight again, ultimately
contribute
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contributing
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to
the
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a
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better product
everyday
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.
For instance
, since KFC have their newest
sauce
, Texas Chicken
involve
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is involved
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in line too. They release the newest which is garlic butter and herb chicken to gain back attention from customers. And now, these consumers have more
choice
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choices
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when they eat out. In conclusion,
companies
presently promote in their
adveertising
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advertising
that their goods are cutting-edge in some
way
because
this
help
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helps
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them
recieve
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receive
a
lot
of notice and
this
should be viewed as a positive development given that buyers will have more options in one category of
products
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • novelty
  • excitement
  • latest trends
  • improvements
  • advancements
  • differentiating
  • competitors
  • innovation
  • progress
  • attracting attention
  • generating curiosity
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