In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today's world, business often
highlight
their items are unique in some Change the verb form
highlights
way
because this
approach give
them a leg to get widely known to their customers. It should Change the verb form
gives
be consider
as a Change the verb form
be considered
postive
development since Correct your spelling
positive
customer
will have more choices in one type of Fix the agreement mistake
customers
products
.
More and more Fix the agreement mistake
product
companies
nowdays
Correct the word
nowadays
are try
to make their Change the verb form
are tried
are trying
products
are
novel in some Unnecessary verb
apply
way
, and this
way
will give them a chance to win influence and interact for
their business. As a feature is launched, there are always a Change preposition
with
lot
of consumers out there curious about
. Correct pronoun usage
about it
As a result
, a range of reviewers is talking about and making the products
again and again appear in
the internet, and strike the Change preposition
on
attetion
of Correct your spelling
attention
to
the users. Change preposition
apply
For example
, in Viet Nam, although
there are a lot
of chicken fried companies
on the market, KFC always stand out in this
area because they constantly came
up with new Wrong verb form
come
sauce
recipe for their dishes. Sometimes, these sauce
inspiration Fix the agreement mistake
sauces
is
Verb problem
inspired
from
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by
the
seasonal food Correct article usage
apply
source
or Fix the agreement mistake
sources
followed
current Wrong verb form
follow
Vietnamese's
Change noun form
Vietnamese
trend
. The Fix the agreement mistake
trends
branchies
have cream, spicy, traditional, fish Correct your spelling
branches
sauce
flavor
and more, And their fish Change the spelling
flavour
sauce
is the newest and there is
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are
not
other brands Correct your spelling
no
have
it, which Correct pronoun usage
that have
capture
a Correct subject-verb agreement
captures
lot
of concern
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concerned
of
people. Customers are in line and line, waiting to try out Change preposition
apply
this
unusual combination.
Making up some new things in business's
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a business's
advertise
should be seen as a positive trend because Change the form of the verb
advertising
this
motivate
these other Change the verb form
motivates
companies
, brands
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and brands
come
up with the same, or not better, creative Fix the infinitive
to come
way
to win the spotlight again, ultimately contribute
to Wrong verb form
contributing
the
better product Correct article usage
a
everyday
. Replace the word
every day
For instance
, since KFC have their newest sauce
, Texas Chicken involve
in line too. They release the newest which is garlic butter and herb chicken to gain back attention from customers. And now, these consumers have more Wrong verb form
is involved
choice
when they eat out.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
choices
companies
presently promote in their adveertising
that their goods are cutting-edge in some Correct your spelling
advertising
way
because this
help
them Change the verb form
helps
recieve
a Correct your spelling
receive
lot
of notice and this
should be viewed as a positive development given that buyers will have more options in one category of products
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