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The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#people #household* #uk #information #features #comparisons
The chart represents the comparison of the two given years of the number of people per
households
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household
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 takes place.
Overall
, one per person in
a households
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households
a household
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are
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is
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 the highest
in
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apply
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number
that
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apply
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shows
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shown
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 in blue colour. In 1981, 17 indicates as 1 person, 31 is considerably increased with 2
persons
, three to four per
persons
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person
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 comes under 20 to 18. In 2001, six
persons
 in a household is the least by 2, after the world becoming as nuclear families two
persons
 in a family are the maximum number of
persons
 in a household. One member in
a
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apply
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hoseholds
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household
households
were
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was
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 risen from 17 to 26
comapring
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comparing
from
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to
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 the period
of
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apply
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1981. From 6
persons
 in a family has been drastically decreased to 2 by the time period of 2001. Comparing between 1981 and 2001, a normal family that has 4 to 5
persons
 in a household was reduced during the age 2001.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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