The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart represents the comparison of the two given years of the number of people per
households
in Fix the agreement mistake
household
UK
takes place.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, one per person in a households
Correct the article-noun agreement
households
a household
are
the highest Change the verb form
is
in
number Change preposition
apply
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
shows
in blue colour.
In 1981, 17 indicates as 1 person, 31 is considerably increased with 2 Wrong verb form
shown
persons
, three to four per persons
comes under 20 to 18.
In 2001, six Fix the agreement mistake
person
persons
in a household is the least by 2, after the world becoming as nuclear families two persons
in a family are the maximum number of persons
in a household. One member in a
Correct article usage
apply
hoseholds
Correct your spelling
household
households
were
risen from 17 to 26 Change the verb form
was
comapring
Correct your spelling
comparing
from
the period Change preposition
to
of
1981. From 6 Change preposition
apply
persons
in a family has been drastically decreased to 2 by the time period of 2001.
Comparing between 1981 and 2001, a normal family that has 4 to 5 persons
in a household was reduced during the age 2001.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words persons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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