The graph below shows the unemployment levels in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1988 and 2008.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the unemployment levels in Ireland
as well as
the statistic
of Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
people
leaving the country from 1988 to 2008.
Overall
, the jobless rate
reached peak
in the first year, Add an article
a peak
while
the figure for resident
leaving was highest in the next year. Fix the agreement mistake
residents
In addition
, both the unemployment rate
and migrants witnessed a significant decline in the following years and then
increased slightly again at the end
of the year.
Look in detail at the unemployment rate
, in 1998 the number of people
who were unemployed hit the highest point at 18%, and then
had a steadily
decrease to 16% in 1990. Over the next ten years, the percentage of jobless Change the word
steady
people
had a significant decline to under 6% and had slight fluctuation before risingto
roughly 10% in 2008.
Turning to the figure for citizens leaving Ireland, 40,000 Correct your spelling
rising to
rising
people
left the country at the beginning of the timeframe, after
that, Correct word choice
and after
reach
a peak at 70,000. In 1990, the Wrong verb form
reached
rate
fell rapidly and remained at around 30,000 until 2004. By the end of the period, 40,000 inhabitants leaving
the country.Wrong verb form
had left
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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