In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Countires
in some places around the world believe that Correct your spelling
Countries
government
should Correct article usage
the government
increase
taxes
on fast food
due to
a rising aspect of individuals
consuming them
, Correct pronoun usage
it
as a result
to
many Change preposition
of
health
risks concern. Is it, therefore
, resonable
to Correct your spelling
reasonable
increse
the Correct your spelling
increase
taxes
on that group of food
.
I strongly disagree with the statement.
Many teenagers and Change the punctuation
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individuals
nowadays work at many different places, despite most of them work
at Wrong verb form
working
a fast
Correct the article-noun agreement
a fast food restaurant
fast food restaurants
food
restaurants because those kinds of restaurant
accept Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
people
in
different ages from Change preposition
of
youngs
to older ones. For Correct your spelling
young
instant
, many children around my age spend time working after school to earn preparation money for university and college in the future. Replace the word
instance
As a result
, if government
increases Add an article
the government
taxes
many individuals
may lose interest in eating at fast food
restaurants and working opportunities would be affected for younger generations and they may loose
their jobs. Replace the word
lose
Moreover
, these days peoples
have different Fix the agreement mistake
people
status
of money, some may be poor and some may be rich. In the aspect of richer Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
individuals
, they dont
care if the Correct your spelling
don't
taxes
increase
or not because they are able to offered
it no matter what. Change the verb
offer
However
, in the views
of normal wages Fix the agreement mistake
view
people
with many responsibilities increasing taxes
in
the kind of Change preposition
on
food
that they may only afford would make their lives harder as a result
it could causes
mental Change the verb form
cause
health
problem
and stress.
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
On the other hand
, government
have many better ways to improve Add an article
the government
people
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people's
health
problem through
eating fast Change preposition
than
food
. One of the thing
they can do is to educate Change to a plural noun
things
childrens
in different schools to remind them of good eating habits. Correct your spelling
children
For example
, in food
clases
at Correct your spelling
classes
schools
Add a comma
schools,
teacher
may change the teaching method from teaching them how to cook a cheesy burger, to how to cook Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
healthier
salad with higher protein and nutrients. Correct article usage
a healthier
Additionally
, improving facilities that helps
with Change the verb form
help
individuals
health
such
as ,
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apply
sports
field, gym, and Correct article usage
a sports
a
outdoor swimming pool may be one big factor that Change the article
an
government
can step in and help, as all of the activities helps improve health
problem like increasing blood pressure throught
running or even make an Correct your spelling
through
throughout
individuals
lung stronge
by swimming.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
strong
stronger
government
should not Add an article
the government
increase
taxes
because it will affect many work opportunities and people
in
different money Change preposition
of
status
would not care, despite they should Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
increase
facilities and educate new generations more about healthier eating habits.Submitted by thanapat1229 on
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