in some places around the world believe that
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should
on fast
a rising aspect of
consuming
themCorrect pronoun usage
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,
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many
risks concern. Is it,
,
to
the
on that group of
.Change the punctuation
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I strongly disagree with the statement.
Many teenagers and
nowadays work at many different places, despite most of them
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at
a fast Correct the article-noun agreement
a fast food restaurant
fast food restaurants
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restaurants because those kinds of
restaurantFix the agreement mistake
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accept
inChange preposition
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different ages from
youngsCorrect your spelling
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to older ones. For
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, many children around my age spend time working after school to earn preparation money for university and college in the future.
, if
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increases
many
may lose interest in eating at fast
restaurants and working opportunities would be affected for younger generations and they may
looseReplace the word
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their jobs.
, these days
peoplesFix the agreement mistake
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have different
statusFix the agreement mistake
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of money, some may be poor and some may be rich. In the aspect of richer
, they
care if the
or not because they are able to
offeredChange the verb
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it no matter what.
, in the
viewsFix the agreement mistake
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of normal wages
with many responsibilities increasing
inChange preposition
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the kind of
that they may only afford would make their lives harder
it could
causesChange the verb form
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mental
problemFix the agreement mistake
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and stress.
,
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have many better ways to improve
peopleChange noun form
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problem
throughChange preposition
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eating fast
. One of the
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they can do is to educate
childrensCorrect your spelling
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in different schools to remind them of good eating habits.
, in
at
teacherFix the agreement mistake
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may change the teaching method from teaching them how to cook a cheesy burger, to how to cook
healthierCorrect article usage
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salad with higher protein and nutrients.
, improving facilities that
helpsChange the verb form
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with
as
, Remove the comma
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sportsCorrect article usage
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field, gym, and
aChange the article
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outdoor swimming pool may be one big factor that
can step in and help, as all of the activities helps improve
problem like increasing blood pressure
running or even make an
lung
by swimming.
In conclusion,
governmentAdd an article
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should not
because it will affect many work opportunities and
inChange preposition
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different money
statusFix the agreement mistake
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would not care, despite they should
facilities and educate new generations more about healthier eating habits.