Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work.Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experience.

People these days spend a lot of their precious hours in the office which causes them to not have enough

time

to spend at home.

While

this

trend has raised the productivity of companies ,it definitely comes with

a

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heavy price of not being able to spend quality

time

for ourselves or with our family members.

Firstly

, every company aims for its

betterment

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and there is so much emphasis

to achieve

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a certain target within a period of

time

. The employers expect the workers to put in loads of work to attain the goal and

that is

what leads them to stay over

time

.

This

in turn increases

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productivity.

Additionally

, if all the goals are met it

also

means more money for

establishment

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the establishment

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and the employees.

For instance

, a sales company may ask their salespersons to market their product and fetch at least 1000 customers

at the end

of the month. Now,

this

might mean that they have to put in more extra hours and energy but it

also

increases the number of buyers and

thus

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profitable to everyone involved.

Conversely

,

this

also

means that the workers are going to be maxed out at work, leaving little to no

time

for them to pursue any other activity be it a hobby or some self-care or just spending

time

with their loved ones

such

as friends and family. Spending a part of the day

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what we love the most has been considered to be the single most important factor to keep going in the long run .

This

culture of overworking definitely has a huge negative impact on the mental well-being of the person and can even lead to

stress related

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health issues.

For example

, people who don’t destress have been found to have ailments

such

as hypertension, stroke and so on. In conclusion,

while

the practice of staying long hours in the workplace has upsides like increasing

productive

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along with

financial benefits it

also

has the downside of the workers being stressed out. The key is to find a good work-life balance that provides us with the best of both worlds.