More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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a number of minors are achieving obesity in developed countries. So it has become an alarming issue in rich countries. In

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problem and provide necessary solutions.

kids

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love to eat fast

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nowadays a lot which is the main cause of obesity. Many fast

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are delicious and

kids

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are often attracted to those mouth-watering

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, which makes them fat.

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, My niece gained 100 kilograms of weight by eating burgers and

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, many school-going children are addicted to video games, which

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bodies fat.

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of physical exercise. In spite of, knowing the importance of workouts parents don't send them to gyms or fields to play regularly.

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, minors are so attached to their game screen that, they often gain weight by sitting in a gaming chair the whole day. 40% of

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, in Australia gets falls victim to heart attack at the age of 10 to 16.

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problem could be, to motivate the children to eat healthy. Including more vegetables in their diet and abstaining

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from fat-building

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will result in a healthy body.

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, my niece has reduced 50 kilos of weight by removing carbohydrates meats and fast

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from her diet.

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, doing regular physical exercise could bring the best results.

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, going to the gym regularly or playing or walking in the fields helps younglings

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in those countries should be nurtured properly and their parents should take good care of themselves.

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, it is of paramount importance that children should keep fit and their parents need to have extra care for themselves as healthy citizens play a pivotal role in

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development.