Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays a large number of populations argue that
workforce
specializing in medicine and engineering must be employed in where they have graduated from, Correct article usage
the workforce
while
opponents believe that everyone could
decide about different aspects of their job and life and there should not be any obligation or enforcement in these fields. In Wrong verb form
can
this
essay, I will explore both perspectives and argue in favor
of individual autonomy in career decisions.
Change the spelling
favour
To begin
with, governments and authorities in some countries have laid down some strict regulations to discourage specialists from emigrating to other countries. For example
, in Iran country
the cost Add a comma
country,
for
university documents release has surged sharply reaching 60 million Rial, which is unaffordable, especially for fresh graduates. The steep expense Change preposition
of
attributed
to the huge amount of funds that have been allocated for education and educational infrastructure. Add a missing verb
is attributed
Thus
, apathy toward this
rising trend would be uneconomical and spoil the invested budget in the original country. The underlying rational
behind Correct your spelling
rationale
this
measure is to prevent a phenomenon often referred to as “brain drain” which could have detrimental effects on the development of the country.
On the other hand
, I believe that not only every individual should possess the right to make decision
about private issues including residence, profession and life partner but Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
also
there should not be any exterior interaction. Otherwise
, the specialists would lose their enthusiasm and commitment to work and would not fulfill
assigned responsibilities efficiently. Change the spelling
fulfil
Thus
, emerging various challenges would be inevitable in that society
In conclusion, I accept that the specialist workforce owe
their advances to esteemed Change the verb form
owes
governments
investment and tremendous efforts. Change noun form
governments'
government's
On the other hand
, respecting to
Change preposition
apply
individuals
decisions would be more appreciable.Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
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