Social media has become a real problem for some young people today, and governments should create laws that allow only people over 18 years of age to have accounts. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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that agree only people over 18 years of age

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have accounts. I fully support

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a measure to do. In my viewpoint,

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can bring many positive outcomes. The advantages of

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laws for youngsters are undeniable and manifold. The first benefit is

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exposes us to different opinions and

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experiences

, which

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them to

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away

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internet and protect their eyesight. They may

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be motivated to challenge existing norms and values, and even generate breakthrough innovation and achievements.

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children can fully appreciate the

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diversity

and richness of cultures

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and can adopt the perspective of the other party when encountering problems. Allowing young people to think about

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from multiple

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can improve their judgment ability for internet

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.

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thinking can

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enhance their

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thinking skill, and they will no longer adopt

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of problems. It cannot be ignored that there are some disadvantages associated with

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practice. One of

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drawbacks is that strict management

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not bring commensurate rewards and leads to diminishing marginal utility, which means that the additional extra limiting minors from holding their own accounts

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as the

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of loneliness increases.

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results in inefficiencies and waste of resources, which could be allocated

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to more productive and beneficial activities. Fortunately, there are some measures we can take to improve

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alarming situation. One of the possible solutions to solve

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problem is to

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problem is to change people’s mindset. They should not be constrained by their habits or impulses, but rather to touch different new things,

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as reading books or

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shopping with friends. By doing so, they can avoid putting themselves in a boring environment.

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means that not only social media can pass the boring time. In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of

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matter largely surpass the drawbacks, as it possesses remarkable merits and the demerits are manageable.