The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
floor
plan of a house between Correct article usage
the floor
current
and Correct article usage
the current
propose
Wrong verb form
proposed
plan
for several building Add an article
a plan
work
. Change to a plural noun
works
Overall
, the ground floor witnessed gradual
change with the expansion and changes Add an article
a gradual
of
some areas.
Change preposition
in
According to
the data, in the current situation, from the entrance a hall stairs
Fix the agreement mistake
stair
directly
seen which it it used as Add a missing verb
is directly
way
to Add an article
a way
went
to the living Wrong verb form
go
room
. Furthermore
, there was
two walls that Change the verb form
were
divide
two main rooms ( living Wrong verb form
divided
room
and kitchen) and at the end
of the wall 2 door provided
to enter those rooms. the biggest area Add a missing verb
were provided
in
the right side was Change preposition
on
kitchen
. There was Add an article
the kitchen
a kitchen
also
a storage situated right under the stairs
.
Furthermore
, based on the proposed changes, position
of the door that used to be located after the Add an article
the position
stairs
then
replaced to the Add a missing verb
was then
stairs
and doors
Correct article usage
the doors
is
moved right after the Wrong verb form
were
entrace
to connect access to the kitchen. On the Correct your spelling
entrance
Correct your spelling
contrary
contatry
the wall that Add a comma
contatry,
separate
Change the verb form
separates
living
Correct article usage
the living
room
and the stairs
has been demolished and the living room
area become bigger than before.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stairs, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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