the two maps below show an area of land before and after the building of a hydroelectric dam . Summarize the information by selectingand reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The provided maps illustrate how an area of land changed over a period of 20 years after accomplishing a hydroelectric dam in 2000.
Looking at an
overall
perspective, it is readily clear that an area of land experienced a number of modifications, the most important of which include an expansion of the Linking Words
river
, a relocation of the village and a disappearance of the irrigated farmland.
In more detail, there was a forest which existed many ancient structures, rare plants and animals in the northwest of the Use synonyms
river
in 1980, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
forest was demolished in 2000. Linking Words
In addition
, there was the construction of a new hydroelectric dam on the south side of the Linking Words
river
, linking two mountains and combining with many electric wires in 2000.
Looking at the maps, we can see an expansion of the Use synonyms
river
which experienced a destruction of the irrigated farmland in 2000. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the village was converted to make way for a new hotel, Linking Words
nonetheless
, Linking Words
this
village was moved to the south of the map in 2000.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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