More and more plastic wastes are polluting in world cities, countryside and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?

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convinience
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convenience
of
plastic
, it is increasingly
be
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used and thrown away
over
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the world
cities
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, urban areas and the sea, which has
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to several issues relating to the earth's
environment
such
as
water
or solid pollution.
Therefore
, measurements to control the amount of
plastic
producing
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in the companies or factories and to convey the knowledge of the people should be taken to deal with it. There is no doubt that
plastic
watses
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wastes
waste
itself
could not
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be
disolved
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dissolved
resolved
over
the
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time and are really poisonous,
thus
when we throw it away, it
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always stay there.
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, when
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plastic
watses
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wastes
waste
watches
are thrown
in to
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water
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,
it
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would
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keep its
shapes
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or soon be eaten by the creatures that
living
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under the
water
. In fact,
plastic
trashes after a long time floating in the ocean, it might reactant to the surrounding
environment
and
realease
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release
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detrimental chemistry that could kill the animals living in the sea and make the ocean polluted. For
examples
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, when someone
thrown
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plastic
bags into the ocean, the fishes might eat these bags and
died
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because of it, the more bags are thrown, the more fishes face
the
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death, after which the dead bodies of these fishes make the
water
polluted.
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,
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similar mechanism
work
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for
plastic
rubbish that
are
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released in the cities or the countryside. To be specific, the wastes might release
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the
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poison into the solid after a long term being there and it would keep polluting the solid until someone
take
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it away. Because of the issues
plastic
watses
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wastes
waste
watches
could bring to the
environment
, some special
measurement
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measures
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should be launched to eliminate
this
stituation
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situation
.
First,
creating a convey and
manage
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the number of
plastic
products that could be processed in the factories and companies could be a good way. To be particular,
instead
of producing more than
demands
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, managing it to be only approximately the requirements could help to reduce the
plastics
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plastic
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goods which
also
means decreasing
the
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plastic
watses
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wastes
waste
.
By
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this
way, the
plastic
rubbish
that is
realeased
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released
to
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the
environment
would
also
be declined significantly.
Second,
besides
controlling the amount of products, measuring the awareness of people about
the
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plastic
would
also
take an important role. Particularly, making convey to test the knowledge and
also
raise the awareness of citizens would
make
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them
to
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have
a
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right incentive to protect the
environment
,
thus
they would be careful and aware of their actions
while
releasing the
watses
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water
wastes
. In conclusion,
plastic
wastes
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waste
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could create
such
pollutions
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pollution
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as
water
pollution or solid
pollutions
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pollution
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;
however
, we could make measurements in companies and factories to control the
plastic
products or convey and raise awareness of people for their actions to deal with it.
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