You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter, state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions would you like him to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,
Dear Sir/Madam,
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on C and C++ programming conducted by your college.
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I am looking forward to hearing from you
Yours Sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
Provide more details about the differences between the course and the brochure.
coherence cohesion
Use a more formal greeting and closing.
coherence cohesion
Focus on one main idea per paragraph and develop it fully.
task achievement
Provide more information about the specific actions you would like the headmaster to take.
lexical resource
Use more academic and formal vocabulary throughout the letter.
grammatical range
Vary your sentence structures and use complex sentences to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures.