The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.
The diagram provides information on
process
of producing compost from organic Add an article
the process
waste
. In general, there are three steps in its production; collecting some specific types of of
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recyclabe
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recyclable
waste
, heating waste
and mixing them
with chemical Correct pronoun usage
it
ingredient
, and Fix the agreement mistake
ingredients
storing
.
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storing it
Initially
, some of organic
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the organic
waste
collected are
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is
mixing
in one place in equal amounts, and the place should be designed to allow the Wrong verb form
mixed
circulating
of air. Replace the word
circulation
Th
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The
waste
should include items such
as food, paper, and various types of plants.
The next stage involves heating and mixing all of waste
with chemical Add an article
the waste
additive
. Adding nitrogen and hot water to the place should Fix the agreement mistake
additives
be carry
out Change the verb form
be carried
in
the same time.
The Change preposition
at
last
step is storing the mixture and waiting for six months until it can be used as natural
fertilizer.Add an article
a natural
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