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The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.

The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.
The diagram provides information on
process
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the process
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 of producing compost from organic
waste
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. In general, there are three steps in its production; collecting some specific types of
of
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recyclabe
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recyclable
waste
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, heating
waste
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 and mixing
them
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it
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 with chemical
ingredient
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ingredients
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, and
storing
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storing it
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.
Initially
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, some of
organic
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the organic
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waste
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 collected
are
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mixing
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mixed
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 in one place in equal amounts, and the place should be designed to allow the
circulating
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 of air.
Th
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The
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waste
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 should include items
such
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 as food, paper, and various types of plants. The next stage involves heating and mixing all of
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waste
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the waste
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 with chemical
additive
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additives
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. Adding nitrogen and hot water to the place should
be carry
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 out
in
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 the same time. The
last
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 step is storing the mixture and waiting for six months until it can be used as
natural
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a natural
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 fertilizer.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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