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In modern times, some species of animals are slowly disappearing. Do you think that it is acceptable l for species to become extinct? What are the possible reasons and consequences of this extinction? Provide reasons and examples to explain your opinion.

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The decline in the number of flora and fauna is indeed a pressing issue confronting many countries worldwide.
While
this
 can be a result of human activities, in my opinion, there are numerous steps that governments and individuals should take into consideration. Humans threaten natural
species
 with extinction in various ways.
Initially
,
due to
 the increased urbanization, governments have to implement deforestation to develop urban residences, followed by a disappearance of vegetation.
Furthermore
, with extensive industrialization, a huge quantity of toxic chemicals is dangerously released from factories to the
environment
,
thus
 endangering the lives of the natural
species
. Ultimately, a lack of restrictive rules and numerous instances of undue hunting occurred in different countries, leading to fewer animals.
For instance
, in Vietnam, where there used to be a huge number of tigers,
this
 animal has been killed for years to serve human demands, and just a few
species
 remain. 
Nevertheless
, governments and individuals should join hands to mitigate the detrimental impact of our actions on the
environment
. In the first place, should conservation plans be effectively conducted through promoting reforestation and protecting the forest boundaries, various natural
species
 will be provided by crucial wildlife habitats. Take as an illustration, that the South African government banned deforestation in 2015, and the consequences have been astonishing, with numerous
species
 saved from extinction.
Moreover
, Individuals can
also
 raise awareness about the negative impact that certain harmful actions, especially the killing of wild animals, have on the
environment
. Various animal rights organizations,
for example
, could educate people about the impact of extinction on human life and the
environment
, which people should follow diligently.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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