Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

period, we are witnessing rapid progress in scientific research, and every day, an invention appears. Parallel to

this

, some people believe, it is better to not display all

this

information

overtly because it is invaluable and scarce, and shouldn’t be accessible to the public.

In contrast

, some individuals consider

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idea false

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and believe it is best to publish as much

information

as we can. In

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essay, I’m going to discuss both views

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and give my own opinion.

Firstly

, having a consistent academic world can be beneficial, and lead the community to obtain more achievement.

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to

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, by implying new technologies or strategies,

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many businesses, industries, universities and other positions, will be streamlined, and prosper dramatically.

On the other hand

, some scientific materials are vital for a country’s safety or diplomatic relationships, and by displaying them, we can put so many lives at risk, so on

this

occasion, it may be logical to keep the

information

clandestine.

In addition

to

this

,

this

research requires a huge deal of money, perseverance, time and energy, and by presenting them in public, we may lower all

this

hard work, and underestimate their value. In my opinion, we have to opt for a balanced point of view in

this

case. What I mean is that we have to put some scientific research in the hands of people to learn and use,

while

some other piece of

information

which is risky, and has some particular features, should stay undercover.