In many cities, the population is encouraged to use public transportation rather than private transport In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of using public transport?

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Nowadays
people
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are increasing transportation day by day either public or private
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, some
people
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believe that using
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in
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metropolitan
city not only
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some
fritful
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fruitful
frightful
benefits but
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offer
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worst impact
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the
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people
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lives. In
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essay,
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per my
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mass transit
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huge pros
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cons and
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will describe
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upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand , community
health
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can be improved by the public traffic,
currently
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masses have been vulnerable
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they prefer to go outside by
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or train because they can stand
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30 minutes to reduce
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obesity and other
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problems without any delay their work.
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, when
people
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set off to the
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station where they require to stand
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half an hour
due to
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this
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they walk
comtinuously
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continuously
so they can improve not only their
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but
also
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any hazards disease can be stopped by
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condition.
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, air pollution may be reduced if folks prefer their public
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transport
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such
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as
,
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ferris
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ferries
,
subways
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and subways
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.
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,
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can
cause
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easily if
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situation
occur
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in
the
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public places.
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with, when
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the public
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start a sightseeing journey
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in
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apply
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which
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distinct type of
people
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who
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have some ill condition owing to
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,
infection
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can spread easily by touch contact.
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, In 2020,
covid
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the
virus was spreading by contact with
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other
person
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people
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or by sneezing so
that
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the
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goverment
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government
had
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stopped
the
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trains and
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bus
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buses
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because
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can spread
in
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all over the
word
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world
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.
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,
some times
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sometimes
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the women feel insecure because of less security in
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public transport
hence
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,
this
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sitauation
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situation
might face
any
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apply
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abuse
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condition
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conditions
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on
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in
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the environment.
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, even though
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the metro
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gives
a
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ample amount of benefits
such
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as mitigating pollution from the country,
reducing
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and reducing
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health
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problems,
nonetheless
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, it has some serious side
effect
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effects
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for the masses like
insecurity
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the insecurity
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of
female
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females
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in the
bus
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despite that
causing
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it causes
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infection
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to the person.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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