More and more people want to own items by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive impact?
It is certainly true that nowadays,society
are
buying trendy Change the verb form
is
stuff
.Because the community think that they should follow the trend.However
,there are some causes behind this
statement and also
some advantages and disadvantages of this
style.
To start with,the first and foremost reason is social media.In view of the fact that all age groups are connected to technology.So,population
are more aware of new Correct article usage
the population
stuff
or brands which are coming into the market day by day and society likes to wear trendy attires and also
branded stuff
in their home.For instance
,In by past days,old
public did not use any electronic gadgets and they did not know about new Add an article
the old
stuff
.That's why,In the past time,groups just lived a simple life and did not have any brand as compared to the present day.
Moreover
,the second reason is education.In the modern era,individuals are well- educate
and they want to show their status in front of others and prefer to purchase costly Wrong verb form
educated
stuff
.Because,
youngster know Remove the comma
apply
that
which types of items they should wear and keep in their house.Correct word choice
apply
For example
, in the 19th century human- beings believed that people should buy only those things which they really needed and also
did not enough
money at that time.
Add a missing verb
have enough
On the other hand
,some pros and cons of
Change preposition
to
this
trend.Firstly
the positives
development is a person can fulfil their dreams like as some Change the noun form
positive
nation
want to purchase well-known brand Fix the agreement mistake
nations
stuff
in their life.But, it's a waste of money.Because,
they buy those things .Which they do not need really. it is a con.Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
,youth are forgetting their culture by getting these things.Which has adverse effects on their tradition.
To sum up
,Individuals should buy trendy development
but within their limits and should Fix the agreement mistake
developments
also
attach to their custom items.Parents should give knowledge to their children .How they can save their money rather than waste ion
unnecessary items.Correct your spelling
on
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