The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car
The pie charts illustrate the preference of people when it comes to the mode of transportation and
also
give reasons for the same. Cycling and driving both seem to be popular for travelling to work and Linking Words
thus
the advantages of each are depicted.
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Overall
, people lean towards cycling for its health benefits and environmentally friendly nature but driving is found to be more comfortable especially when the office is far away.
It is clear from the chart that, the reasons for cycling are 30% for fitness and 30% to reduce pollution. 15% use cycles to avoid parking problems Linking Words
while
13% find it economical and cost-effective. 12% consider it to be faster than driving.
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On the other hand
, 40% of people drive to their jobs as it's more sophisticated. Linking Words
Additionally
, 21% seem to live Linking Words
further
away leaving them no other choice. 14% find it faster and easier to carry things.
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Last
but not least, 11% are worried about their safety and Linking Words
hence
use cars.Linking Words
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