You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words
There are the number of individuals that like to spend their time
while
doing some activties that are beyond their professions, called as hobbies
. These hobbies
may help people
to get to know themselves better and this
can also
work as the secondary occupation for some persons. This
also
helps in increasing their thinking and creativities. Therefore
, every human beings should have some different kinds of hobbies
. I agree to the former statement, which is explained with some relevant examples.
To commence with, hobbies
are very important part of human life because this
help them to know about themselves better and the activities that help them to calm their mind. For instance
: according to
some scientific studies, researchers have shown that people
who perform some different kinds of hobbies
are in less stress. Hobbies
help them to calm their mind and this
will help them to think better and be more productive. Therefore
, hobbies
should be an important part of the societies.
In addition
to this
, hobbies
help people
to think differently, which help their brain to function properly. If an individuals are thinking on different basis, this
will help them to be more creative. If people
are more creative, they may discover some different things. For example
: there are the number of men and women who take arts and crafts as their hobbies
, however
few of them have these kind of passtime activities as their secondary profession and is making incomes from that. For that reason, hobbies
can be beneficial for mental as well as
financial matters.
To conclude
, hobbies
are the very important part of life, they should be practised more by some population. This
will help the societies to be more creative and intellectual. This
will also
help them to be more productive and think better. Therefore
, hobbies
are devoted by the number of mankind in different nations.Submitted by khushiaggarwal255 on
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coherence cohesion
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- Dear + name
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