The table below shows the average income and divorce rates of different sized families living in England in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the average income and divorce rates of different sized families living in England in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table summarises information about
divorce
rates of
different sized
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families
along with
the approximate family earnings in England in 2004. The
divorce
rates
is
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represented in percentage and the income in dollars.
Overall
, the lowest
divorce
rate is seen in smaller families who make more money.
On the other hand
, a large household with less income has the most divorces. It is clear from the table that, people who earn more than 63,000 dollars and have no more than 3 children have less chance of splitting and their
divorce
rate is lower than 25%
in
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average.
For instance
, the
divorce
rate is only 15% when the money earned is $73,000 and only 1 juvenile is present.
However
, the percentage of people split is 32, when the brood consists of 4 kids and only makes an average of $ 57,000. The
values
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value
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of
divorce
is even higher at a shocking 42% when more than 5 young adults are involved.
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