Deforestation has been an increasing problem over the last few decades. What are the primary causes of deforestation? How can we solve the problem?

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decades. I believe that industrial expansion is the root cause of the problem and we need to regulate them to minimize the consequences. The problem that needs to be considered is that plant-based industries that emerge in many countries, that are rich with

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, are demanding more space to increase their production. That happens because the demand for foods, beverages and other plant-based goods

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growing since the population in many new metropolitan cities

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the request for palm oil in Jakarta

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2010 to 2020 as the changing diets of 1 million people

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fried foods.

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, the manufacturer has to expand their agricultural land so they can grow more crops and

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the demands.

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formal step, we can control the industrial expansion by limiting the amount of the consumer.

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, society

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to adapt by incorporating new creative ways of consumption.

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, people can create new dishes following the availability of the raw material in the market

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as in the year 1980,

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, when rice became the main dish replacing potatoes and creating a lot of new food

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as fried rice, yellow rice, etc. With

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move, manufacturers do not have to expand their factories unless the government considers

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. In conclusion, the issue of deforestation has been caused by

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expansion of

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for manufacture as a response to the high demand for plant-based goods.

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can be turned down as the government can regulate the demand.