The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car
The first pie
charts
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chart
give
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gives
informatiom
about the causes Correct your spelling
information
that
many people Correct word choice
why
went
to Wrong verb form
go
work
by
cycling.Change preposition
apply
While
the second pie charts represent about
the causes why people travel by car.
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apply
Overall
, it can be seen that the most reasons
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common reasons
of
cycling Change preposition
for
was
health and Wrong verb form
are
work
out and Wrong verb form
working
reduce
pollution.Wrong verb form
reducing
In contrast
, faster was lower than others. In addition
,the highest of driving was comfort , but the lowest was safety.
To being
with, travelling to office by bicycle, for physical and Verb problem
begin
work
out as percentage as pollution accounted for 30 per cent
. Followed by car parking and price was at 15 per cent
and 13 per cent
respectively. Faster was only 12 per cent
.
For the reasons that why someone prefer
to Change the verb form
prefers
used
car went to Change the verb
use
work
, 40 per cent
was comfor
than cycling. Followed by Correct your spelling
comfort
long
way to company accounted for 21 per Add an article
a long
cent
. Faster as proportion
as Add an article
a proportion
carry
things. The lowest was safer than cycling.Change the verb form
carrying
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