You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graph describes how many men and women
reading
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read
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books at
burnaby
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Burnaby
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public library from 2011 to 2014.The given statement
in
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is in
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thousands.
To begin
with,in
this
graph
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graph,
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the number of
reading
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readings
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of men in 2011 started
on
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at
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3000 and slightly above in 2012 now it was 4000
moreover
it
was
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apply
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dramatically increased in 2013
reached on
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reaching
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10000 and
it was
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apply
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went up
on
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to
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14000 in 2014.
On the other hand
, the number of
reading
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readings
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of
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for
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women in 2011
it
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apply
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was higher
from
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than for
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men
it
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apply
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was 5000 and they
are increasing
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increased
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till
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to
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10000 in 2013 but they
were
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apply
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abruptly declined in 2014 now it was 7000 end of the period.
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