Number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island (2010-2017)

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular
caribbean
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island between 2010 and 2017° The line given graph
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how many visitors stayed
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caribbean
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wand between 2010 and 2017. The graph
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the total
member
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of visitors was high level
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3.5 million. Tie
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measures
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begin with, the total number of
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2010 07 1 millien and they roughly rose in 20l2 reached
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15 Atter that the number of reside in 213 sharply went up 3-6 million in 2017
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the period. The tourist stayed
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island in 2alo on over the island. it was 5
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mateover
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they remained stable in 20/1 but
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up between 2013
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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