The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates how the library has changed within five years.
Overall
, it’s seen that the location has not changed, and a few sections have been added to the library.
To begin
with, as you walk into the entrance gate, the librarian's desk and stairs are still in the same position, but if you look on the left side, there are computers in front of the stairs. Next,
on the right side of the room, you will see they added 3 more sections, which are kitchen, economics, and law, as well as
fiction. Then
, in the centre, you will notice that the tables are altered to fit the long model. At the end
of the room, there is a children’s area and a children’s book section. Five years before, this
area was filled with fiction, and the children's area didn’t exist. Lastly
, on the left side, the newspapers and periodicals segment is replaced by films and DVDs.Submitted by erniwbs on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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