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Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven’t agree how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?

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There is no denying the fact that a person wishes to live in an ideal
society
 in a reassuring and developed way.Since time immemorial, humans have been searching for stability in their
society
, but
on the other hand
,
this
 has not been achieved
due to
 their differences. When we talk about the perfect
society
, the idea comes to our mind that a
society
 is united in all aspects,
such
 as following orders,
in addition
 to avoiding problems. Here comes the question: how can we be an ideal
society
? we will analyze the issue from several sides.
Firstly
, the social side. A person wishes to administrate greater positions and
covets
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 more things than others, albeit
this
 is harmful to
society
 in terms of bias and unfairness among all individuals.
Secondly
, from the psychological aspect, some people want all their needs to be met, but
this
 is a deficiency for others, and
thus
 there
isno
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is no
 equality among all members of
society
. Well in
this
 paragraph we will discuss the solutions for both sides.There are some matters that must be done to create a loving and ideal
society
.In the first problem that we mentioned previously about the social aspect of people, I propose a solution, which is the availability of jobs for everyone and complete satisfaction with themselves, as we can see, unemployment is the main cause of the physical and intellectual destruction of
society
.
In addition
 to
psychological
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 aspect, when there is an annual fee for work, all their needs will be met. ‏In conclusion,there are many solutions to have an ideal
society
, but I have highlighted only the big problems and the solutions to them.
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Ensure that the essay fully addresses all parts of the prompt, including the most important element of a perfect society and the steps to achieve it.
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