While some think family run business is the best way to run it , others think Family run business is problematic. What is your opinion.

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various methods of success in
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. Some insist that
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business
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can be more beneficial than
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with other individuals.
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, others say
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business
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is problematic. I agree that
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family run
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business
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is problematic.In
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business
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may face many challenges,
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. They will
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a number of conflicts
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between them.
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for each other. Who
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to work with individuals that
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me upset
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Yes, nobody
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it. In
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society
, we always endure to earn money. Because we don't know each other
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we carefully
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others
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to make him/her displeased.
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,in
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, the
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of
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feel comfortable
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each
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. They will reveal their heart.
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speaking, we believe that honestness is better than lies. In
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can mislead the
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and make
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conflicts
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kind of conflict will influence familyship. There is
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saying: don't do
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and trade money with your friends or family.It will destroy your relationship. I believe that
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family run
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problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • beneficial
  • strong family bonds
  • trust
  • challenges
  • separating
  • personal
  • professional
  • conflicts
  • disagreements
  • succession planning
  • transfer of leadership
  • unique
  • pride
  • legacy
  • struggle
  • adopting
  • new ideas
  • innovations
  • long-term focus
  • commitment
  • difficulties
  • attracting
  • external talent
  • expertise
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