The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

The chart shows the present road and the future plans for the main road in Farmshire Village by 2024. The small suburban store will not satisfy the increasing needs of the villagers, so a new supermarket will be built in the southwest of the Cooperative Bank. The employment assistance will replace the store to offer help for everyone.Woods in the northeast of the farms will be removed as the field will be developed into a community soccer field which will benefit the soccer education in the center.It is for sure that more trees will be planted in the southwest of the farms.The farm in the south will be expanded into a poultry one so that the supply of chicken or chicken eggs will be supplied to the villagers more quickly.

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, it is beneficial for the ecosystem of the centre. The other infrastructure will remain. All the proposed changes will make the road network more productive.

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