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The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students)

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students)
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of
Vietnamese
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 studying abroad in 3 countries from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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,
while
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France
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 and America witnessed upward trends, the opposite was seen in
Russia
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. Notably, the growth rate of
Vietnamese
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 in the US was the fastest. In 2001, with 1,5
million
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, the
number
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 of
Vietnamese
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 studying in America was the lowest, less than half of those in
France
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.
This
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 figure increased continuously, surpassing
Russia
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 at 2
million
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 in 2005 and
France
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 at 2.5
million
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 in 2007,
then
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 it reached 5
million
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, becoming the highest
at the end
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 of the observed period.
Conversely
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,
although
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France
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 attracted the most students with more than 3
million
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 in 2001, it saw a significant decrease of 2.5
million
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 in 2005. After maintaining
this
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 level for 5 years, the
number
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 of
Vietnamese
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 learners in
this
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 country rose rapidly to 4.5
million
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 in 2010.
On the other hand
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,
Vietnamese
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 students in
Russia
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 ranked 2nd with 3
million
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 in 2001. The following ten years witnessed a dramatic decline in the
number
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 of
Vietnamese
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 students in
this
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 country, hitting the lowest point at below 2
million
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. Despite its growth again from 2010 to 2.5
million
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,
Russia
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 was still a country that attracted the least.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, vietnamese, france, russia, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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